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The Eye of Puella Magi Madoka Magica

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The start of series 2 begins with this lovely suffering starter!

I've been in a mood since last night, and one of the requests put up was of Madoka Magica, so I figured I would show the darker side of Madoka Magica, this is Madoka's grief seed, Gretchin is her Witch form, this
show really brought a new standing to the whole "Died a Hero or Live to become a Villain." 
[Flowey Emote] Feeling Sad. 

I used all ink on this one even though i really wanted to try it with watercolor tbh
Image size
1936x1936px 1.23 MB
Make
Apple
Model
iPad
Shutter Speed
1/15 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
160
Date Taken
Dec 6, 2016 1:10:11 AM -07:00
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I love Madoka Magica,and I think the concept on this drawing is pretty good!
One of the most noticeable flaws in this drawing is that the stroke needs to be smoother and cleaner so that the drawing doesn't look messy.
Another thing I see here is that the drawing only occupies a small portion of the sheet of paper. I also used to do that when I had less experience but you'll get used to use it all.
I don't know what materials you used to draw this,but where it says "Madoka Magica" It looks like when you erase the pencil that is under the pen when the pen is not dry yet so it goes all over the paper. If that's the case you should be more patient and wait until it is dry.
I hope this is helpful!
Bea :3